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	<title>Comments on: Extreme LinkedIn Profile Makeover &#8211; Doug Hanna</title>
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		<title>By: me</title>
		<link>http://linkedintelligence.com/extreme-linkedin-profile-makeover-doug-hanna/#comment-727</link>
		<dc:creator>me</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Aug 2007 00:39:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The first line of the summary is OK. The rest is dull and overuses the verb to be, &quot;I am this I am that&quot;. What have you done? Use some action verbs and give us some results. Ditto for the entries under experience.

I have no idea what a business channel is and can&#039;t figure it out from your profile because it&#039;s all jargon. Not knowing what you do there&#039;s no way to know if I know someone who might want to know or help you despite your profile&#039;s focus on what you want. There&#039;s also no way to know how you might help someone else, and your profile doesn&#039;t make it look like you&#039;re interested in anyone else. See previous sentence.

There&#039;s nothing in your profile that makes me think &quot;here&#039;s someone interesting&quot; and I or so-and-so should get to know this person. As a result I&#039;d never look at your external links.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The first line of the summary is OK. The rest is dull and overuses the verb to be, &#8220;I am this I am that&#8221;. What have you done? Use some action verbs and give us some results. Ditto for the entries under experience.</p>
<p>I have no idea what a business channel is and can&#8217;t figure it out from your profile because it&#8217;s all jargon. Not knowing what you do there&#8217;s no way to know if I know someone who might want to know or help you despite your profile&#8217;s focus on what you want. There&#8217;s also no way to know how you might help someone else, and your profile doesn&#8217;t make it look like you&#8217;re interested in anyone else. See previous sentence.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s nothing in your profile that makes me think &#8220;here&#8217;s someone interesting&#8221; and I or so-and-so should get to know this person. As a result I&#8217;d never look at your external links.</p>
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		<title>By: Extreme LinkedIn Profile Makeover</title>
		<link>http://linkedintelligence.com/extreme-linkedin-profile-makeover-doug-hanna/#comment-726</link>
		<dc:creator>Extreme LinkedIn Profile Makeover</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 25 Aug 2007 17:49:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Doug Hanna [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Doug</title>
		<link>http://linkedintelligence.com/extreme-linkedin-profile-makeover-doug-hanna/#comment-725</link>
		<dc:creator>Doug</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Aug 2007 21:39:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Feel free to combine these comments: I made some changes and think it looks a lot better! Thanks for the advice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Feel free to combine these comments: I made some changes and think it looks a lot better! Thanks for the advice.</p>
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		<title>By: Doug</title>
		<link>http://linkedintelligence.com/extreme-linkedin-profile-makeover-doug-hanna/#comment-724</link>
		<dc:creator>Doug</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Aug 2007 21:30:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the suggestions Scott. I will definitely keep them in mind. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the suggestions Scott. I will definitely keep them in mind. <img src='http://linkedintelligence.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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